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Will needs to learn how to write in clear, concise, language. Even when I (occasionally) think he's making a good point. Good effing grief.
Seriously? A little overwrought, maybe, but I really liked the writing in this piece.
Seriously, the flowery style or whatever it is detracts from the message. IMHO. The article in the post above this one, however, is clear and concise.
Will needs to learn how to write in clear, concise, language. Even when I (occasionally) think he's making a good point. Good effing grief.
ReplyDeleteSeriously? A little overwrought, maybe, but I really liked the writing in this piece.
ReplyDeleteSeriously, the flowery style or whatever it is detracts from the message. IMHO. The article in the post above this one, however, is clear and concise.
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